Chapter One can be found
HERE
"Get in," commanded one of the men in black. Stocky, but with a tapered waist and a strong jaw line, the man had a glock .45 in a holster that rested at his waist. Dark gray eyes studied Gregory, sizing him up. Gregory felt the part of the puny math geek in comparison, sliding into the dark car without question. The driver glanced up into the rear view mirror. Eyes hidden by a pair of square framed sunglasses.
"Mr. Merkin. Thank you for coming without a fight. We do like these extractions to be clean," the feminine voice was cool, smooth, and her vowels were rounded like an Italian. Gregory stored this useless piece of observation away. "Uh, they have guns," he said in shaky reply. The men who flanked him now sat next to him. They each had their fire arm strapped to their waists on the sides closest to the door. They didn't acknowledge the statement of fact as Gregory glanced at them uneasily.
"Why am I here?" he ventured to ask. Stony silence met his query. The car started to drive away, turning left out of the alley. "Where are we going? What did I do wrong? Why is this happening!" Gregory's questions were ignored until he sat forward in his seat, one hand on the back of the front passenger's side seat. He could see the driver's profile. Aquilian and strong jaw line, she was classically beautiful. The gentle curve of her bust was beneath the thick black cotton combat jacket. Black pants and a firearm strapped to her right thigh made her impressively seductive for the personal and firearm power she possessed. "Sit back, Mr. Merkin. Now." The driver said, her voice brooking no argument. The flash of white teeth seemed more preditory than pleasing. He didn't move, testing his luck. A moment later, the man to his right grabbed Gregory's shoulder and yanked him back.
"I just want some answers," he muttered, crossing his arms childishly. The driver looked up sharply, startled almost. "Yes, yes. So do we, Mr. Merkin. That's why you are here. They say all the genius' always answer their own questions eventually," the smirk was heard rather than seen. Gregory tucked his chin to his chest, feeling the bubble of personal space he had shrink dramatically as the car took a sharp turn, uncerimoniously pushing him into the man to his left.
"Empty your pockets, Mr. Merkin," the driver commanded. She accelerated the vehicle, shifting and accelerating again.
"Why? I don't have anything dangerous. A protractor, maybe," Gregory's humor was lost on this crowd. The car pulled into the parking lot of a large gray-metal building.
"Because, Mr. Merkin, you need to forget who you are."
Comments (20)
O.O
Hurry up and write some more =P
@SerenaDante - Hehe. thanks! It's a round robin! :)
Good story line. Now I want to read the next installment
interesting story :) love it
Excellent!
Oooooh there are so many directions I could take this... It'll take a week just to narrow them down! Great continuation of the exposition. :)
hats off to you, my dear. lovin` the details.
Well done! You know, the one drawback to this whole thing is that now I have to wait until the next person writes their chapter before I can read what happens next! haha
...Also, I like how you let it progress more naturally instead of trying to force it in a particular direction. Bravo!
Rock on! We have to wait a whole week?! This was very nice. :)
Ahh, theplot thickens. @shards_of_beauty - Good luck..
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A protractor can be dangerous if used in the right way!
Oh nice turn at the end. I love it! You're a great writer.
oooh....nonono, please dont make this be a round robin. write more...you have to. :P very nice.
Next chapter is up here: http://shards-of-beauty.xanga.com/698943910/and-take-a-new-angle/
*applaud* Cant wait to see how the next person writes theirs! Good job dear
cleverly written. i hope the next entry lives up to yours and matt's. =)
Wow, this was awesome! I've read the seventh chapter and the first ... so far I'm loving it!
"and i jizz in my pants"
Great piece of writing!